Wanna do a good deed?

[silverai]

I know that I don't have _that_ many readers, but they're still different readers to what one of my friends has, so if any of you feel like doing a good deed....

My friend has written some lyrics to some songs he's created on his computer, and would like some feedback. I think they're pretty good. Not what I would write, or at least not what I would write anymore, but I still think they're pretty good.

The lyrics can be found in his LJ
here
here, and
here.

Thanks all :D

Comments

Thanks

[cear.livejournal.com]

Hey Hel, thanks for mentioning my lyrics in your post, these ones aren't based on actually music yet just thought I would write them up and see what happens but still needing some constructive feedback, I was inspired to write those from things around me, particularly "Don't Judge Me". Haven't had the spark to write much this year, mostly constructing tracks. I have actually begun working on some lyrics for a track I have made, its a kinda of a dance number, very tricky to write lyrics and add music and to make music then add lyrics. Anyways thx for the mention and your comments :)