Wanna do a good deed?

I know that I don't have _that_ many readers, but they're still different readers to what one of my friends has, so if any of you feel like doing a good deed....

My friend has written some lyrics to some songs he's created on his computer, and would like some feedback. I think they're pretty good. Not what I would write, or at least not what I would write anymore, but I still think they're pretty good.

The lyrics can be found in his LJ
here
here, and
here.

Thanks all :D